Sunday, November 17, 2013

My Creepypasta OC: "Forgotten Venessa"





 
 
Forgotten Venessa
Or
The Lost Bell Girl of the Cirque de Rouge Circuit

Hatred is a Conniving Essence

            The nearby tower rang its bells loudly. This was the one sound I truly remember from that night.
            My parents were rushing me towards an open box car. My bells and jewelry softly echoed through the night. Papa lifted me into the car, handing me some of the bags we were carrying. Mum then climbed in, pushing some hay away to make room for your luggage. The car had a sudden jolt as Papa scrambled in. The sound of yells and train whistles were muted as Papa used all his strength to close the sliding door.
            “Papa, what’s go-“Mum placed her hand over my mouth. Why were we on this train, it wasn’t the Rouge company train. Most importantly, where were we going?
            Through the cracks of the door I could see the glow of a lantern accompanied by the sniffling of a dog. Mum pulled me closer to her; she didn’t take a single breath. After what seemed like minutes of high tension agony, the sniffling soon disappeared after the lantern’s glow. My parents let out a soft sigh of relief.
            The train began to gain speed as the engine roared through the night.
            “Sleep darling, we should be there by sunrise.” Mum said as she released me for her hold. “Where should we-“She hushed me. “There’s nothing to worry about Venessa.” Papa reassured me as he pushed some hay together. I lay down while rubbing my eyes. My eyelids felt heavy. They slowly closed on a lasting vision of my Papa wiping off the last of his clown make up.
Pitch black, utter silence.
            I awoke to a stream of sunlight that shown through the boards of the box car. I lifted myself up so I was sitting on my knees. I searched the area and found my parents were nowhere.  A wave of panic arose in me. I stood up quickly and froze at the absence of my bells.
            I observed myself to see that not only my bells were missing but my earrings, bracelets, and necklace were gone. Even my anklets were removed.  Had someone found Mum and Papa?  If so, why wasn’t I taken? They couldn’t, wouldn’t leave me, right?
             The door was slightly opened. I quickly walked over to the door. It was opened just enough to fit my arm and shoulder through. With all my might I pushed to open it further. Nothing. It wouldn’t budge. One more try, and another, then another; each more desperate than the last. Still nothing. I leaned on the opening, completely wore out.
            The barking of a dog was in the distance. I ignored it. Suddenly it was louder. Too tired to even care. Unaware of anything of that moment, pain travelled from my finger tips to the realization in my brain. Coming back to reality, I was on the floor of the car. The dog had jumped and to bite my hand. Its powerful grip had lead me to my current position. The dog’s teeth were so deep in my hand; I desperately tried to pull my hand away.
            The usual train whistle went off followed by the sudden jolt in result of the engine starting. It was enough power to send the door slamming shut. I remember screaming, then nothing.
Pitch black, utter silence.
            The pain was too much. When I woke up there was a figure sitting across from me. I couldn’t make out a face, just a form that was darker than the shadows surrounding it. I attempted to sit up but fell back against the floor boards when my left arm failed.
            It seemed like this startled the figure. Two bright orbs flashed through the darkness. It reaches towards me, slowly pointed its finger. I looked down at my left shoulder-
That led to nothing…
            My arm. There, there was no arm there; just a stub that was tightly wrapped in my bandana. I was in complete disbelief.
            I looked back at the figure, only to be met with and empty void. The door of the box car opened with the figure standing in the doorway. The mass formed together to resemble a big time gambler.
            “Who are you?” I asked standing up. “I am the Wheel Spinner. I’m a deal maker. Do as I say and I’ll be sure to keep my end of the bargain.” It said walking towards me. “What do you mean a deal?” I asked backing against the wall. “I lost a pair of crooks last night and the only way to find them swiftly is looking for them during the day. I don’t do so well in daylight. Let me use you as a vessel and I shall return the favor.”
            “If I do this, will you help me find my parents?” I asked. “Well of course, Venessa. A deal’s a deal,” It said with a sinister grin. “That is on a slight condition. If these crooks cannot be found by the fall of two moons, then you’re mine.”
            It held out its enormous hand. Unsure of the situation, I blindly set my hand in the figure's.
Pitch black, utter silence.
 
TO BE CONTINUED.

Thursday, September 5, 2013

The continu- Oh sorry, I mean Episode 2

         

          Oh boy, oh boy. The aftermath, the continuation. The suspense is over, the smoke has cleared, and we are shown our boys a bit ruffed up from their fight. Luhan is nowhere to be seen, he's burdened by guilt and probably a bit confused about what happened. Luhan's connection to Kris is still unknown but he still has his photo.

        A major question I have is why the girl is always with the boys. Could it be it's all of the guys' job to protect her?

        Kyungsoo's okay! He has such a dorky smile in the hospital room:) It's obvious that Luhan really didn't mean to hurt him, that's why he standing outside the window.

        Jeez the next scene is just too cute. Luhan reminds me of a wounded puppy. The scene also shows that the girl isn't really scared of Luhan. She follows him and takes care of him. When she's looking at the photo of Kris and Luhan I noticed that there's a second frame. I'm thinking there's some sort of significance behind it.

      Another question I had was why Kai was going to Luhan's house. Hm, puzzling.

    When the girl gets kidnapped, the gang leader calls Luhan. But I'm wondering who called Kai, is It the girl? oh but when Growl plays, you know it's going down. I'm happy that the boys come to
help Luhan fight. Its almost like sweet revenge on the opposing gang. I really do think Kai has some connection to Kris and Luhan.

      After Luhan is attacked, the others run to his side. Did he become human? Did the girl cure him? Who knows. But then we see Kris in Luhan's room. Kris seems pretty angry. Does he feel betrayed by Luhan in some way. Or is he furious because he thinks Luhan is dead. Anyways I had a thought that maybe the girl belongs to Kris, or maybe she is his sister. 

Friday, August 9, 2013

Book Trailer!


              This is a make-shift trailer for a Story/Book I have began writing. Its about an average guy, Sebastian, who is transported into the fantasy world. He ventures along familiar fairytale alliances to save the veil in which separates the real world and the fantasy world.

              Many people have asked why I used kpop music videos. Kpop videos are very loud and interesting, plus they help represent just the basic structure of the characters.

Thursday, August 1, 2013

MmmHmm! Dat Sexy Continuous Shot, Warehouse Swag.

 
 
Yesssssssss! First off can I just say that I legit had to pause this video every few seconds because of the overload of Exotic Swag! These twelve boys have displayed a whole new personality. And here I was thinking Wolf was amazing, Growl definitely topped it.
 
The song itself says Swag, it forms a style that I haven't seen in Kpop in a long time! Its almost like a mixture of a spunky DBSK song with a dose of TLC at points. Ugh, and might I say that this song is PERFECT for D.O. and Luhan's voice. Don't get me wrong, all the guys pull the song off amazingly, but for some reason it just flows when they sing.
 
What really impressed me, and I mean really really, is that the whole Music Video is one continuous shot. Which, considering the dance moves and group changes, says a lot about how much they've practiced. Just think, if one person messes up they have to start all the way from the beginning. Also they seem to be wearing modified versions of their uniforms from the Drama Version.
 
Also Growl is most likely the reason the Continuation of the Drama MV wasn't released yet. This song will prolly make an appearance in the video, and we shall finally see what happens.

Tuesday, July 16, 2013

Exo Wolf....... and the long awaited Drama Version!

 

Just like every Exotic in this Fandom I squealed at the news that SM released the Drama Version of Wolf!

          The beginning  shows Luhan and Kris crossing paths. Kris is leaving, for whatever reason, and it's shown that they both have their MAMA symbols. I've re-watched the beginning so many times. What I interpreted was that Kris was leaving, I think we all noticed this though. But I feel that maybe Kris was a Lone Wolf, and for a reason that I can't figure out, he has to leave. Luhan looks at him in a questioning manner, and Kris places his hand on his shoulder. The question is: Is Kris entrusting or ensuring Luhan with something. The song in the background is Black Pearl, which pretty much emphasizes that Luhan has a new journey ahead of him.

        In the next scene we see the girl moon gazing. I have seen many people say that it's unrealistic to see the moon in the daylight. Well I'd like to argue against that. There have been many times that the moon viewable during the day, yes it's faintly visible, but it's possible. Just wanted to point that out.

         Well anyways, Luhan is being chased by bunch of masked thugs. People also say that it's unrealistic that he's doing all these flips and parkour. I feel that this helps emphasizes that Luhan is a supernatural being. Actually it looks as though he is taunting them. He saves the girl prolly just because he is a good guy. But it seems he got more than he bargained for by doing so. It looks as though he made some sort of connection with her.

        Luhan is a new student at the girl's school and what do ya know, he sees her again! Luhan then befriends the boys of Exo and they play some Soccer! What a surprise, right? Luhan then shows them some moves, fighting moves. Strangely the whole time the girl tags along, and she seems pretty close to the guys. Exo makes sure she escorted to the bus safely and are in the process of leaving when they are stopped by the gang of thugs from earlier.

        If there's one thing to know about SM, its that some of those guys will be debuting in years to come.

        One question I have is why don't they fight right then and there? And also is it just a coincidence that D.O is always near Luhan? D.O sits behind him in class, he's part of the group hug in Soccer, Luhan shows him some fighting moves, and he joins Luhan's side when Luhan is confronted by the gang.

        The guys enter an old rustic room and they oddly look eager to fight! This got me thinking:

                      I have watched many Asian films and in the school setting. gangs are popular. But what baffles me is that groups of guys fight each other and then the next day they act as if nothing happened. Is fighting just an activity? I dunno.

       In the midst of the fight Luhan can see that Exo isn't doing too well, so Luhan Let's Out The Beast! Luhan looses control and D.O tries to settle him. Well this results in Luhan thrashing at D.O, and he goes flying into a pile of boxes and beams. Its funny how at this point the other gang has left the building. Kai's pretty ticked and Chen's far past enraged. If weren't for Chanyeol and Lay, we'd have a whole other fight going on.

       Luhan is left confused and prolly a bit scared of himself. Of course to make him feel like more of a jerk, the girl shows up. "Who are you? What are you?" she asks. She runs away crying and Luhan is left to sulk. AND US EXOTICS ARE LEFT WONDERING WHAT'LL HAPPEN NEXT BECAUSE

                                                                     To Be Continued...

Overall I loved the MV, then again the guys could be watching paint dry and I'd still be amused. Cant wait for the next part!